Writing

 29-10-13 Hannahs angry birds character

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cQ2sDWKwVwm6GIoDLw8RYiBdrsvS9mXINzlhGW9nkk8/edit?usp=sharing



 29-10-13 Hannahs angry birds starter

 https://docs.google.com/document/d/16XnurFd763Ei1WJjTcK-O1P3Y6b_4cASTYTysCnizRg/edit?usp=sharing


 Aaliyahs Character Description
We have been working on writing character descriptions. Hope you enjoy:)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1deHSriLtUaLF0o94mkzHOCBxt14YAYNLkJPE1PSOoq0/edit?usp=sharing

Desert Island
this is about my family
Hope you enjoy :)
By kyralee
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18OkHyM4OvHAj_oOoHOxBJvm6O3iWIqfT7TJ6XwA0xpE/edit?usp=sharing

The Deserted Island 
This is my Story about my Family.
Hope you like it.
By Katherine
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o7x-xlN9sqaSFNcHcnw2Uz4pOCndxys2dKl66sseGTM/edit



25/10/13
Henry's Desert Island story beginner 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18OkHyM4OvHAj_oOoHOxBJvm6O3iWIqfT7TJ6XwA0xpE/edit?usp=sharing

25/10/2013
Regan's awesome character description
click here to view 


 23-10-13 Aaliyahs
https://docs.google.com/document/d/17M3dZmFF8ycMAalClLTTbtX36YLRj7v_QKBcqwTCiY4/edit 




  16-10-13  Aaliyahs
 We have been learning how to write naratives and the starting off them. We used Temple Run and Angry Birds.
  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OzASJoKs-ESmzeh6cmhOovjJa6DTTk_KoE-_leiYci0/edit


16/10/13
 Henry's Temple run beginnning.
 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eoZLC-jLf0AffOoFqFPuJeor2hAZx42JqW3umTJxs78/edit?usp=sharing

Karim's Temple Run Story Beginning:)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wLx5RrXuo1xwpneDr4LyHTdg3lxv-cN2yidzut3VKdw/edit?usp=sharing

 16/10/13
Georges temple run starting.
 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pxGhZPjJi6naVuJC6e9wMRFEvxVZlfBV5sp4iXT1Hrs/edit?usp=sharing
 
 16-10-13
 Aaliyahs
We have been learning how to write naratives and the starting off them. We used Temple Run and Angry Birds.
 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WjtPJM18Dl3Wc8wYxkXaRorbDI5vNkjaIMnZXa9v4Wk/edit



Dragons is app that generates 3D dragons on the screen. The viewfinder on the screen is like a camera so that the user can aim the ipad and take photo's of their choice with the dragons layered on the photo. The students created a short story incorporating their chosen dragons and uploaded their pictures onto book creator. This is their work.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/m4cn9zsate5oli0/The%20dragon%20invasion.pdf

https://www.dropbox.com/s/5tqnqsvlz0k95ps/Kelly%20%26%20Jade%20DRAGONS!!!!.pdf



6 comments:

  1. Good writing aaliyah i like the way you described the temple


    from kyralee

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  2. Awesome job Aaliyah I thought you had great details in your story and your writing was so detailed I had pictures in my head.

    Next time I think you could probably write more and come up with more creative things.

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  3. Aaliyahs you had a great describing word and a fantastic verbs like 'SLOWLY'
    nice!

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  4. Nice writing George. It had some very descriptive words. I think you should extend the writing, it would be fantastic!

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  5. Hey George, its aaliyah. I like your starting of the temple run story. I like how you put A cold haunted moan echoed. Its really good. You ended it very well it made me want to read on.

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