Thursday 7 March 2013

Aidans machinarium


Machinarium


As I open the tall wooden door, a cold and wet feeling comes past me. I can see giant, metallic buildings some of them are covered in bright orange rust. It is so foggy even my shiny eyes can barely see through it. I feel very alone and scared in this thick fog. After walking through it I nearly fell in a pond that is dark brown and looks like it has been neglected for years. There is a long pole coming out of the pond leaking oil.

bens writing

 ben wirting



https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B0qzc5r_YD_dQ05QSm1QVmNxcms/edit?usp=sharing

free falling by George Gibson

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DFZNdfrCcilltqZmEki5rgkIeTygbAVniC-8vWVSfDU/edit?usp=sharing

Regan's writing




https://docs.google.com/document/d/1B8YXDmxQsZ205imtLTto0BFGdeg9cAkbietLvqbmysw/edit?usp=sharing



This is my writing

Rusty!

 This is my descriptive writing about Rusty the robot.


https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Tg4yyErvVBmd1qhIqaIISZVjQkLEojciwwFz38bcENA/edit

Aaliyahs writing :)

 this is my descriptive writing





https://docs.google.com/document/d/14Tl5ilKb_wg1QJm3BDwpgG5EOhGLRrrkKaA4JdOR6-U/edit

hannahs writing

 this is my descriptive writing



https://docs.google.com/document/d/1j_RCUeDr4M9O7v8pUeC9rygkzsuOyHBMIgyFHRLXc74/edit?usp=sharing