Wow awesome story, A little bit broad but it is awesome!
Nice story!I liked the descriptive languageNext time you could maybe make the way that the alien left a bit longer and exciting
Thank you for comment Rhiannon, I will think about it in future.Katherine
Great story Katherine!-Kosmas, Riccarton Primary School
Hi Katherine,Your story was briliant and was very interesting and included lots of infomation. from Jarrod and Daniel
WOW! Awesome story Katherine! It actully made me think it was real life and not a dream! I like how you described the alien very well, and I could picture every image and scene in my head!From Emma :)
Wow awesome story, A little bit broad but it is awesome!
ReplyDeleteNice story!
ReplyDeleteI liked the descriptive language
Next time you could maybe make the way that the alien left a bit longer and exciting
Thank you for comment Rhiannon, I will think about it in future.Katherine
DeleteGreat story Katherine!
ReplyDelete-Kosmas, Riccarton Primary School
Hi Katherine,
ReplyDeleteYour story was briliant and was very interesting and included lots of infomation.
from Jarrod and Daniel
WOW! Awesome story Katherine! It actully made me think it was real life and not a dream! I like how you described the alien very well, and I could picture every image and scene in my head!
ReplyDeleteFrom Emma :)