Tuesday 28 May 2013

The War

This is my story about a soldier who goes and fights in the War!!!!

Hope you enjoy it!!!!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dpu144FxmlE5v4w8pdAYiLyRI6Lle87TnbliDmvroWo/edit
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6 comments:

  1. room 63 June 2013 at 02:26

    I would love to read your story but you haven't allowed anyone to read it. You need to go and change your settings.
    Mr Hickey

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  2. Rozetta13 June 2013 at 17:47

    I would really like to read your story but you havent allowed me to read it.You really should change it or share it.

    from Rozetta

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  3. Anonymous13 June 2013 at 19:27

    Cool story I liked the killing.
    Liam.J.

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  4. Cody13 June 2013 at 19:39

    Nice work I like your story.
    Cody

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  5. Cody13 June 2013 at 19:40

    I like your story.

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  6. Lavisha23 October 2013 at 13:45

    I really liked your descriptive language and alot of detail.

    Next time I think you could a bit more dialog. :)

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