Thursday 23 May 2013

The Day I Jumped Out Of A Plane!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AAZvoPpznIbr1_hCK8BGHYxckBvVmbxZUoPwDAMG1S0/edit

3 comments:

  1. Great story Blake!! I really liked the description you used in it, it really painted a picture in my mind, well done!!
    From Silvie :)
    Kaharoa

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  2. great! i love it the description is awesome good work

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  3. I really liked your story Blake! It was interesting.
    Next time don't forget to put explanation marks when someone is speaking.

    By,
    Vinaya

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