Sunday, 26 May 2013

Room One Learners: Writing Helpful Blog Comments

Room One Learners: Writing Helpful Blog Comments: We are learning to write helpful comments on other people's blogs.  We know we've given good feedback to the writer when we: C om...

Thursday, 23 May 2013

the day i jumped out of a plane

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14-2MJSoacp0oUQMRzf_JDuvTTd52ZrP2m0ibP-i7vZs/edit?usp=sharing   by blake

THE DAY I JUMPED OUT OF THE PLANE

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VvDNg0udXGwtpbDmXZCuuLfZiHK9kf9x1-rgk0gFPBc/edit







 







 

The Day I Jumped Out Of A Plane!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AAZvoPpznIbr1_hCK8BGHYxckBvVmbxZUoPwDAMG1S0/edit

Kyralee's story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lDLglxS9UU_Dj0RupcMHLzs4C2yw0VeGX_PdZdKchog/editThe day I jumped out of a plane

Aaliyahs story about The day I jumped out of a plane

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LUia0T49YgGvJ84FNa7oXZUIffJb-FlY0ePGvN0nI-M/edit?usp=sharing

THE DAY I JUMPED OUT OF A PLANE by alex hart

                  PLUMMETING  
 WALT : Use descriptive language to make writing more interesting.

As I secured my goggles to my helmet and strapped my boots on, my stomach churning as I stepped to the edge. I lothe heights but I know that the Ahaura townsfolk would be cheering for me down below as I was about to say no I felt a vicious shove in the back and before I knew it I was plummeting 3000 feet.

Henry's story

ocument/d/1ynRgF8_qPWmylsP4VGfvCVb1O5UMifwOrIz6o1gJB8A/edit?usp=sharing

Amiees, A world without Gravity


 Here Is My Story.
Amiee

 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bVvX8Wki7sT7tyXqTptXtsmaaTfoGmdhEE05LRlh8OQ/edit?usp=sharinghttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1bVvX8Wki7sT7tyXqTptXtsmaaTfoGmdhEE05LRlh8OQ/edit?usp=sharinghttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1bVvX8Wki7sT7tyXqTptXtsmaaTfoGmdhEE05LRlh8OQ/edit?usp=sharing 

                 this my story
              
  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ynRgF8_qPWmylsP4VGfvCVb1O5UMifwOrIz6o1gJB8A/edit

hannahs the day i jumped out of a plane

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1h5A1qKHXjrE2rvs23jVTLq05cwTU1FHqVy93VaW-s5w/edit?usp=sharing

Mystery Skype

This is our first Mystery Skype. It was a lot of fun but not so easy to guess where the other school was from.

 

Tuesday, 21 May 2013

the day i jumped out of a plane George G

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FcapRJXDGT_rls7cHg7IKXLJVzLJRbKYs_-RgxhMTsw/edit?usp=sharing

The Day I jumped out of a Plane

Hi everyone. This is my latest story. Hope you enjoy. By Jess

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HqF4DYDi2CeMpBB1clQ_TN9U2BcvB-LRRnQk3-RLQXg/edit?usp=sharing

The Day I Jumped Out Of The Plane

https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Regan%20parachute.pdf?w=AAD_Aal6-ENPYxY1MuO53aB6pWIgAC-SVpZES6C2BCmquQ

Hope you like it;)
by Regan

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jEqfO5E-F0JAuQZLlH6m2t-cV0FMb9Dxb_gGTBePRpg/edit?usp=sharing

hope you like my story :)

The day I jumped out of a plane!!!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10f7IMavxvQDNvIgkVESo6aH6_45Xzom77aMH11EgLEw/edit?usp=sharing
Hi everyone this my new story I hope you like it.

The Day I jumped out of a Plane

Hi everyone. Here is my latest story.  Hope you guys enjoy. By Lititia

 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Rb4ElKtpQt7dJpErADvA2Y5Gi2AGmur9XHLVg51whMM/edit?usp=sharing

Thursday, 16 May 2013

Room 6 Quadbolgging Questions

Hi guys. We have put together a short video with questions we had about your class and school. We hope you get a chance to look at it and post some answers onto our blog. Happy watching and we look forward to hearing from you.

video

Monday, 13 May 2013


Check out the Literature Circles first conference and you tube post. The group worked hard and worked really well independently.

http://youtu.be/n6NCbcYjbe4