Sunday 24 March 2013

Weirdo

This is Geroge G's character https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FxDl1tY9To2f4ozV2MOmzNRnnSkiQ_ivc8TSx7SXeww/mobilebasic

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  1. hay George aaliyah here your story you write is fabulous it all linked together I like the bit when you say that on its plump tummy and had floppy green hands the end of your story was awesome it finshed nicely

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  2. Hi George you story had heaps of desribing words like pointed, plump,bolts and lots more.It was a good idea to call it weirdo because it sounds weird. I really liked it.Keep up the good work.
    Katherine

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  3. very funny story I can't find anything wrong about your story. BY ALEX HART

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